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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-irb-extended-mobility-18
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2024-11-12
IETF LC End Date: 2024-11-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:This is a well written document ready for publication.

Major issues:None

Not an issue but an observation. The difficulty of sequence number management is central to this text, particularly in distributed systems. I wonder why in this modern age of accurate time distribution, time is not used as a method of indicating the currency of a protocol item in our designs.

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments: Nits produces the following warning:
The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7432, but the abstract doesn't seem to directly say this.